Ice
Still, silent
Melinging, disintegrating, disappearing
A short-lived substance
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Now just water
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Serena Liu • May 21, 2024 at 11:51 am
There are only 12 words but this cinquain is a masterpiece. I think there is a hint of a peaceful tone in there, or maybe because it makes me think of ice on a snowy winter day. I love your word choice too in line three. 😀